Friday, June 27, 2008

Virus !

virus


Let me stay awhile here I say, I need
let me just see you enough, my need

times recent, I have this feeling that you are a virus
brimming happiness, vaulting barriers as in circus

a smile that forms in thee, here with you
something special gleaming in those eyes, I knew

this way, unlike others, I do love you my virus
be with me all day, rule me, my world; like great Cyrus

walking away as you do often, as you said you wanted
crazy I am; I just feel inside empty, my soul haunted

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The image of the 'simian virus' is the courtesy of the internet.
The current song was played here once before. But I feel that it is worth playing one more time.

“Little wings” by the corrs.
Use a head phone if you really love music.

35 comments:

Srijith Unni said...

That`s so different jac..! Usually virus is associated with disease, suffering.. It requires a really positive frame of mind, to pen such lines.. :)

P.S : Nice Song.

have Fun, Take Care and God Bless!

With Best Regards,
Srijith.

meetu said...

stay away from viruses jac ...they are deadly .

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

That is one lucky virus to have a poem dedicated for it! :)

I updated btw!

Janice Thomson said...

What an excellent metaphor Jac - one gets a powerful image of a destructive love - one that asphyxiates rather than bringing the joy of life to the other person. There's a number of ways one could read the into the meaning of this - much enjoyed as always my friend.

ani said...

i never knew we could see virus in such a different light.. nice..

and the song is lovely as usual :)

Lorna said...

I love the Corrs

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

beautiful poem! glad you're back to writing them. :)

Mahi said...

hey, this is the first time im reading a poem on virus, lol!awesome one, jac!

Sam!! said...

Beautiful piece of writing.. love your song selection as always.. :))

Take care

VIDYA said...

whoa! A Poem on a virus, tht 2 a positive one,, the picture is of a real virus, through a microscope ot sumthing ??? i thik i have a few inside me now. :( Inside my throat to be specific of thier location.

Only a great person can love a virus; or mayve we ve all loved viruses without realising wat tey were and then later regreted. its takes a lot to not regret right?

Kai C. said...

so sweet

Priya said...

A different piece from u.

Othersideblue said...

ille?

Nea said...

The poem reminded me of a relationship also, one that I had once. One that was very hard to leave......even when I knew it was not good for me.

A very interesting poem..

Rose said...

:)))))))))))

..Me

Dotm said...

Funny how it is shaped like a weird looking wreath.
I finally am able to post. Have been reading your blog and some others the past few days while internet Explorer kept telling me it wasn`t responding when I would try to leave a comment. Today it is finally working better.
Now it isn`t showing the letters, so it probable won`t post afterall.
Nice music.

Keshi said...

so that means Im a Virus? :)

Keshi.

Jac said...

@unni
I know that it is quite different. Perhaps You aren’t aware of many viruses that goes through out body without harming us ?

Thank you unni

Jac said...

@meetu
A civil servant has to be braver than that meetu. They have to face calamities without batting an eye lid, isn’t it?
Thanks for the concern meetu

Jac said...

@sammeera
True!
I will check up. Thanks.

Jac said...

@janice
Like your drawing and poems, every one looks at it in a totally different perspective

Jac said...

@ani
But seeing is believing!

Jac said...

@lorna
A pleasant surprise!
I thought I am dreaming when I saw your name here. After this long this is something like home coming,
Thank you lorna

Jac said...

@andrew
Thank you so much.

Jac said...

@hima
By and by, you will be seeing a lot of viruses in Pala. LOL

Jac said...

@sam
Thank you for the feedback. GBU too.

Jac said...

@twinkle
Yes, it is the microscopic projection of Simian virus.

I don’t think there is no virus in your throat but may be a few ‘kokkapuzhus’ in your intestines which are not viruses at all. Hehehe !

Your last comment is very true. We hate many of them without a reason. LOL

Jac said...

@kai c
Thanks.

Jac said...

@nea
:)
A very scientific poem too. LOL

Jac said...

@othersideblue
Athey !
Yes, very true !

Jac said...

@kalyani

(((((((Hugs)))))))

Ithra Pettenno ?

Jac said...

@priya
Someone has to be on their side !
Thanks

Jac said...

@dot
It is microscopic projection of simian virus.
Thanks for the feedback dot

Jac said...

@keshi
You don’t look like a virus at all keshi .
On the other hand, you look pretty, like someone I know so well…if you trim your eyebrows.

No pun indented.LOL

Thank you for the feedback keshi

Sreejith Kumar said...

Good one J!!!! Another dimension to a virus perhaps... :-)