Monday, September 10, 2007

Ready

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Words are now do’s and don’ts lurking one’s life
every day turns a countdown marked with knife

when an oasis turns a desert, marring none to survive
I lie cuddled in sand, stone-like, resisting life to revive
staring at sun, a soul made ready, shedding all reserve

23 comments:

Neers said...

WOW!!! i am bowled! this is damn neat! thank you, jac!

pria said...

A lonely wanderer indeed.

aurora said...

I don't know which to return to, the words or the image. Both are striking.

samrina said...

Very well written...

Thanks for sharing.

Hope you're well.

Take care

pink ginger 珂琳 said...

Very meaningful Jac. Sad picture though.

MM said...

Awwwww!!
:(

Shahrzad said...

hi dear Jac,

I'm back again and I see I lost some of your posts here. I'll try to spend more time in blogger,if I can! lol...
Wish you the best.

Janice Thomson said...

Excellent Jac! Both the picture and your words grab the reader with the reality of life in astounding clarity.
Love that last line...very moving.

Keshi said...

great post Jac! the image reminds us of LIFE...we r born alone, struggle all our lives alone and we die alone.

Keshi.

mindinside said...

It's true sometimes one feels like reaching the end..
and again sometimes recieving a warm smile brings you back to life.

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

cold reality...

LADY LUXIE said...

moved me...

Walker said...

A statue to mark the ages

alex said...

Jac,

Do take care. :)

The journey is lovely.

PS: I have noticed strange pattern made my some worms; i was thinking of whom to ask. :) Shall send you the pics as soon as possible.

starry nights said...

Jac beautiful words and the picture as well.

Kai C. said...

very nice

Geets said...

cool post, jac

Gazza said...

You take great photo's Jac,what was that by the way,a cockroach?

CapCity said...

always love to see thru your lens & read your expressions, jac! a treat everytime!

MM said...

hey and ofcourse i wud be eternally grateful if u cud modify my link on ur blogroll!!;) :D

thx in advance!!
http://moviezmazaa.blogspot.com

:)

_V_E_L_U_

November Rain said...

shivers... creepy crawlies

(I know I am the one with tarantulas)
Loved the Prose

freddie said...

really really good!
ciao from Rome
freddie

Jac said...

Thanks to neers, pria, aurora, samrina, ginger, mm, shharzad, Janice, keshi, mind, Andrew, luxie, walker, starry, kai c, geets, cap, novy and Freddie for their comments and goodwill.

@alex:- I am not an expert on worms, but do send it let me to take a look.

@gazza:- It is not a cockroach, it is in fact a giant water beetle…comes out to visit us during heavy rains.

@mm:- I will add it pronto,Velu.