Wednesday, December 20, 2006

My parting shot

I like it now as the sunrise is here

Sunrise here brings in now the chirping of birds
my veins start thumbing as I see you in smiles
you leave & I feel then my heart is in shears
I make me work, like a slave till I tires

in desk, when I feel the curves of my board
the screen comes alive as you jump in onboard
tiring and weary, yet I still go forward
sunlight is fading as the sun goes downward

I do not like, but the sunset is here

With incoming dusk, I feel a sense of scared
a nightmare now starts & my soul is not spared
it starts with bees that just buzz in my head
making me lone like a nobody’s child

as lights are all off; I am thinking of you
a ghost in me says that ‘she no more loves you’
turning and tossing I spent all the night
my welcome song is the call of the birds

I like it now as the sunrise is here

This is my story as I wanted to tell
loneliness force you to be in a shell
I want to smile, and I want it in style
give me a hand and give me a smile

I am a bit sad but laughing with you
this is my time to say good bye again
God knows, I know not, if I see you again
sing with me plz! Come ondance with me plz
Merry Xmas! Merry Xmas!
Merry Xmas to ‘one’ and to all
xxxx
I do not like, but the sunset is here

63 comments:

starry nights said...

Jac..brought tears to my eyes.this is such a beautiful poem. kind of sad, I dont know what to make of it.Are you leaving us again.Jac you can make the sunrise last for ever it does not have to set, atleast in our minds. Just beautiful jac.

Sarah said...

dey, chekuthaney..ethentha, pathey kandey kali aa? randu chutta adi de kuravundu!
Wishing you merry Christmas

Anonymous said...

Merry Christmas Jac!!!!!!!

Anonymous said...

jac - Beautiful pictures! The nice thing about sunsets is that we know there is always another sunrise just around the corner.

Dotm said...

very nice. Loved the sunsets.
Merry Christmas Jac.

Mindinside said...

Merry Christmas :)

Be safe and smile now and ever

Anonymous said...

Very nice Jac. I love sunset more than sunrises.
But then again I live in the nught.
Merry Christmas buddy.

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I love poems that use sunsets!
Merry Christmas to you, too. :)

Anonymous said...

Beautiful poem Jac.. Wish you too a merry Christmas and a beautiful prosperous New year.

What I like best about sunset, is that it is a time of going down and yet, it is so beautiful, which is like saying that there is an inherent beauty in those moments of sadness too. and yet that tiny streak of light as it goes down, so symbolic of hope, that tomorrow, there will be a new sunrise, a new day, a new dawn.!

Keep Writing..!

With Best Regards,
Srijith.

Saroj said...

Merry Christmas Jac!

An angel who brings happiness in others’ life is sad! Why??

Keshi said...

aww ur going again? not fair :*(

Keshi.

Seema said...

Jac…Lovely words u've penned n the pictures are awesome...the sunset is something i watch everyday n relish...i love watching sunsets!

Here's something for you…

The Sunrise…a new dawn ringing in beauty n life

The Sunset…a beauty leaving with promises of a new dawn…n yeah she keeps her promises !

One is incomplete without the other…they compliment each other to give new life !

So its always only a matter of time…an enchanting wait for the sunrise (its not longing here cauz it doesn’t keep you waiting too long!)

Jac…I am only hoping n praying that you r saying GOOD BYE to the lonliness n that shell…it’s a new dawn with new beginnings with lotsa smiles n cheer..am sure u arent leaving this space!

Wishing you all the joy n peace n a lot of new beginings at this beautiful season of Christmas…a season of giving…a season of new beginnings n spreading love n cheer !

Loads of love n luck to you n your near n dear ones !

starry nights said...

Jac..forgot to wish you a Merry Christmas and a really bright and happy new year :)

Rose said...

We have been witness to ur sunrises and sunsets for quite some time now.. We are there for you always..

To smile for you when you want to take a deep sigh..

To laugh for you when you are fighting a sob..

To touch you softly when you pull away..

To gaze at you tenderly thru the words of ur heart..

We are there for you always..

Take Care of urself for me..

:)

..Me

Rose said...

Jac.. We have been witness to your sunrises and sunsets for quite some time now.. We are there for you always..

To smile for you when you want to sigh..

To laugh for you when you are fighting a sob..

To touch you softly when you pull away..

To gaze at you tenderly thru the words of ur heart..

We are there for you always..

Take Care of urself for me..

:)

~hugs~

..Me

net-net4 said...

Hi from France...
I invite you to visite my blog...
I make 2 fotos a day and if you leave me a small poem or a funny comment i will edit it in the front page next to the pictures...
Read you...

Anonymous said...

dont tell me you are serious! we will miss you..a lot. cant imagine not reading ur blog and all the nice things you say here..plus, ur comments on other blogs and how u care.

we're all going thru things isnt it, jac? differnt lives and different issues perhaps but. just live.

Anonymous said...

"With incoming dusk, I feel a sense of scared
a nightmare now starts "

Dont be...you might miss an opportunity to look at stars and enjoy them!

samuru999 said...

Jac
A beautiful poem!
But, are you really leaving us again?
Makes me sad...don't go!!!

Merry Christmas and wonderful wishes for a bright and brilliant New Year!

Margie

Rose said...

You wudnt even reply to our comments, wud you?

:-\

..Me

Wanderer said...

Shall Wait,with ears straining to hear the birds chirp again ...
;)

and while you are gone, take care of them cheethas for me will you :)

Sarah yodu njan yojikkunu ,
kapirri kuttenu randu adi de kuravunde !!!!!

Seema said...

Jac...you arent serious...am so sure...hopeful that this page cant be abandoned...in fact confident!!!
So yr coming back..
Ini venamengil malayalathil parayaaam manasilaayilengil :)

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Anonymous said...

Hey Jac..merry christmas..and wishing lots of fun and reasons to smile for next year!!


And no more goodbyes buddy..cya next year......

Anonymous said...

merry christmas too

candytuft

hellbunny said...

Have a wonderful christmas Jac

Anonymous said...

happy holidays to u & yours {{jac}}

Cecilia said...

Beautiful poetry...keep up the good work!:)

MoodsAndColors said...

Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!!!

Othersideblue said...

"It needs no dictionary of quotations to remind me that the eyes are the windows of the soul."

Max Beerbohm

jac,
Keep your eyes open, please
at least in the day time


Merry Christmas :)

pink ginger 珂琳 said...

Jac,
Sunrise & sunset touch our heart in different ways.
beautiful post.

Lorna said...

Merry Christmas, my dear Jac---I'm going to assume that your "last post" title is artistic license...

Dotm said...

Hi Jac, Know you are off for a rest from blogging, but in case you are still reading posts, I want to wish you a wonderful New Year filled with much pleasure and the best of health. Hope your leg is getting better.

starry nights said...

Happy new year Jac.May the next year bring many beautiful sunrises and sunsets. Miss you:( take care

Anonymous said...

Hope you had love ones near on Christmas. All best wishes for the coming year!

That was a lovely poem

Seema said...

Jac - may this new year ring in a lot of new beginings..wishing you, now n always, just the best in love n life...have a great year ahead..awaiting the comeback!

Colleen said...

Lovely lovely poem, and the pictures are extremely beautiful.

Sorry I haven't been around much lately, I've just been really busy.

gel said...

Sunsets stir my soul.It clearly sounds like you're battling many emotions.
Take care, while you're away. You will be missed.

Anonymous said...

This is beautiful Jac,
I like especially, usages like - 'I make me work, like a slave till I tires'
sounds charmingly unassuming!

Merry Christmas and have a great year ahead !

Tiesha said...

I'm dancing, I'm dancing! :)
Thanks for a great post and beautiful pictures. Happy New Year my friend.

Neers said...

Jac, beauiful, as always! have a great new year!

Anonymous said...

Great new year ahead Jac...

Anonymous said...

Happy New Year, Jac!

Anonymous said...

Happy New Year Jac

hellbunny said...

happy new year

Jay said...

Here's to a beautiful new year, no matter how you spend it.

Keshi said...

Happy New Year Jac! I miss ya!

Keshi.

zzz-writer said...

enjoy your break jac
and i wish you a very Happy New Year
take care
~ zzz

silence said...

Happy New Year.. take care
god bless!
So here I choose a name for myself

starry nights said...

Jac is it time for sunrise yet? take care miss you.

Chaotic Serenity said...

Beautiful!
I wish you the happiest and brightest New Year ever.

Dotm said...

Hi Jac, Hope you are having a good time. Hope to hear your leg is better when you come back to posting. Hope it doesn`t require an operation to cure it.
Wishing you a wonderful year ahead.

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samuru999 said...

Hello Jac
Sure do miss you, and your wonderful posts....hope you come back soon!
Take care!

Margie

Anonymous said...

Come back jac! please? :)

Anonymous said...

hello ,
:) Amazing poetry!!

Hoping to see more like this ...
Cheers!

samuru999 said...

It was so wonderful to have a visit from you, Jac!
I have been thinking of you and wondering how you are.
Hope so much you are well and having days of much joy!
Take good care!

Margie

Anonymous said...

buddy its too early for a parting shot..wanna see u comeback!! :)

Anonymous said...

jac,
how are you? love and hugs.

Anonymous said...

Heyy Jac,
Where are you lost? Gone again.
Such a painful poem and that sunset. Made me sad.

Hope you are doing fine.

Do comeback soon.

Dotm said...

Jac, I see you left a short note with a June in place of Jan,with no comment place. So, I am leaving you a message in this last post. Hope the short note means you are planning on starting posting again.

Many times I have asked you how your leg is, still waiting to hear. Hope the leg has healed and no longer paining you. I never did know how you hurt your leg, or what is causing you all the leg pain.

Hope you are ready to start writing in your blog again. You have been missed. I enjoyed reading your posts and hope to soon be reading more.
Have a good week. i don`t like this cold weather we are having where I live either.