Sunday, August 27, 2006

Silent as whisper

In through the wind she comes
caressing, gliding

in through the wild she comes
a tigress, a cheetah

in through my dream she frills
sweet and sugary

in among clouds, shimmering
a star, afar

in through the rain
in through the pain
silent as tears

in through my breath, she comes
a sigh
as whisper
But in this flower remains a sliver
she is my lover destined for ever

33 comments:

Tarini said...

very good.

jac said...

tarini

Good to hear that from you.

Thanks.

Anali said...

Great music, beautiful flower, how relaxing. It's like a meditation.

jac said...

annli

I am flattered with a comment.
My great draw back, I am easily flattered. LOL

I had problems with the installation of that player, even forcing me to do it a number of times to play.

I like that music too... one of my favorite 'Hevia'

Thank you for the visit.

Jay said...

Wow, those are very complimentary. Very nice.

jac said...

jay

Before I go away, before it is too late
...before I am helpless.

Thanks.

mathew said...

soothing poem..!! and great music too!!

Keshi said...

this is magical!

Keshi.

Mindinside said...

A beautiful gift for your lover it is.

Thanx for the music
Good taste.
I like Hisham most

Rose said...

Hmmm.. Does ur wife know abt this "flower".. ??

;)))

..Me

Neers said...

wow!! she is my love forever... and long time, i willed someone to keep me forever... :)

how, we, the human think and will alike... :)

I love Munich said...

Hmmmm ... sound like a VERY special person! A very lovely gift ... no doubt!

The music is GREAT ... I like it a lot! :)

blogtest said...

so t-w-e-e-t and p-r-e-t-t-y flower! impressive poetry too...im sure your wifey/lover is in cloud 9 while reading this ;;)

aklanta said...

so you have got perfect love...no conditions...no expectations...just fragrance and care

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Saroj said...

Jac, are lovers destined? I am still confused!!

hellbunny said...

A very passionate piece Jac.
Love the music also it fits well with the post.

Wanderer said...

WOW!!!

So few words ,
yet so all encompassing

The pain in love,
The Power in love,
the Sweet side of love and
the not so sweet as well..

all in one breath...

gr8..

Monica said...

Jac, should you ever wonder why I selected you for a Talented Tuesday...or why I often tell you I would be first in line to buy a book of your poetry...just read your own post today.

Beautiful.

starry nights said...

That was really beautiful Jac.

Neers said...

sometimes the whisper, is so much more than a scream

Keshi said...

so quiet in here..

Keshi.

the sunflower said...

the flower is beautiful... as is the poem...

and the melody is awesome... :)

Rose said...

Hmmm... No reply to comments for quite some time.. Wat hua?

:)

..Me

V N said...

Somehow I am reminded of the lines ~~~ In the streets,
a million people pass me by;
in every face I see your eyes~~~

PS: I just love that music!

jac said...

mathew

can you call it soothing.

Thanks and I consider it a compliment.
:)

jac said...

@keshi

I didn't know that it can work as magic.

Thanks.


@mind

She can be anything or anybody. LOL

Thanks for the compliment.
Hisham is my favorite too.

@rose

I try not to let her know. LOL
It seems that One day I will get caught.
Thanks for the visit.

@neers

I wonder if you are trying really hard for that. But if you are, then I have a guaranteed answer for you...you will.

You will also be rewarded for your patience.

@munich

Well! It is.
You are welcome anytime and thanks for the compliment.

jac said...

@shine

Right !
Should be in cloud 9 but then woman are different species. They do unexpected things at unexpected times.

Yet, thanks for the compliment

@aklanta

Let them be free, if they are yours, they will come back
…if not they were never yours.

Thanks for finding time to visit.

@pat

Welcome to the window to my soul.

I have seen some lovely pics there and I am sure that I will be regular checking out there.


@ saroj

Make no mistake about it…if you wish from your heart, then it is.

Thanks for being here after a long gap.

jac said...

@Hellbunny

A Yes, passionate indeed and it is my favorite music too.
Thanks for the compliment


@wanderer

You said it buddy…few words but means a lot and in one breath.
Thanks.

@Monica

I never forget a kindness and appreciation. Though I don’t believe that my poems are worth publishing, if ever I publish …I will be at your doorstep with a virgin copy duly signed.

@Starrynights

Thanks Lalitha !

@Neers

Always, a whisper is more than a scream, neeraja
Thanks for the second visit.
:)

@Keshi.

Yes, it is quieter than a prayer hall or church that you find solace.
Thanks for the visit.

@Sunflower

Welcome to the window to my soul.
I am really flattered by the compliment. The music is my favorite from hevia.
Thanks again.

@rose

It’s because I didn’t see you much now a days after your Hyd trip. I wonder why it is your fav city other than what you said it as your tenure for MBA.

@Velu

Yes, may be more than a million.
The music is my fav and it is hevia.
Thanks for the visit and compliment.

sp said...

nice...

Anonymous said...

beautiful.... just as you are!

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