Sunday, July 29, 2007

yet another day !

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This is the end of the day as in every day
feeling the unknown heat of the bay each day
or watching sunset… be it any day, Monday to Friday
I have it all marked in a page a day, even today

This is about bubbles, tiny globes, that lives hardly a day
at times as pairs, twined like couples on a wedding day
flying high and low, drifting like balloons freed on a birthday
inside, are souls trapped, dreams withered, shrieking mayday

throw off that pin, sharp as a harpoon used on whale hunting day
It needs just a shake, to make them break and bring their doomsday
let those bubbles dream and live in moments of joy, yet another day

20 comments:

Um Naief said...

what a beautiful poem....

it's quite unique... to think about bubbles w/ our souls inside... floating... drifting...

so easily broken... like our souls, dreams and life. it makes me think of innocence and it's loss.

Vickie said...

Just beautiful---at times I think I am floating or drifting through life.

Beautiful picture.

Mónica. said...

what amazing poem!!!
Hi, I'm from Uruguay.
I hope you visit me.
My blog has a button to translate spanish to english.
I'll see you.

Kiss to you.

Mizrepresent said...

Beautiful...and dream i do...every day...every moment of my life!

CapCity said...

:-).......SIGH......

PS - been loving your music selections, but rarely comment on that...

Anonymous said...

whooohooo...gollywags..wooow!..enjoyed the poem...inspiring...geez' I want to coo' myself...if only I didn't have to have to go off to work.....cool song..cool poem...made my day...

luv' yah Jac!

Luxie doo' here...

Keshi said...

pretty pic n great verse to go with it Jac!

Keshi.

Jac said...

Um Naief

OMG! That is is lot of compliment for what I thoiught as a silly scibbling.

Delighted with your response.
A pity ! they can stay only a day.

Thank you.

Jac said...

vickie

I know that you will enjoy it being a gemini.
:)
Thanks.

Jac said...

monica
Welcome to the window, a feather from Uruguay.

Sorry I couldn't read you, due to the translation problem. But I will find a way, other than babel fish.

Thank you for the ardent compliment. Come again if you like what I am writing.

Jac said...

mizz

Dreams are hopes and hopes are lies, but that doesn't prevent me from dreaming too.

It is part of the growing process...an inert process of life cycle.

Thank you for the comment and feed back.

Jac said...

cap

I know that you are music lover but I wondered that perhaps my taste was not matching yours. Thank you for letting me know.

>>>sigh<<< as in relief or happiness ?

Thank you, cap !

Jac said...

luxy

What happened to your ID ? Why @annon ?

Yes, cool off here as you do it there. Missed you and thought when you will visit me !

Thank you luxie for that gigantic compliment.

luv, back to you, lux

Jac said...

keshy

This is nothing compared to your huge readership and compliments you receive every day.

I am small and humble. Thank you, keshi.

Aurora said...

This is well done, Jac.

Janice Thomson said...

Beautiful Jac! Love the ideas you presented here. The pic is awesome.

Walker said...

Very Nice Jac and I love the picture

CapCity said...

Jac, my original HUGE sigh I think was a mix of both happiness & relief...it was the immediate response/emotion that bubbled up withIN me....;-)

SoulSearch said...

Amazing words...
representing an amazing concept...

Writing always gives me happiness, poetry take it to another lelvel altogether!

Thanks for sharing this poem...

Peace,
SoulSearch

Neers said...

jac, this is super cute! and i love the song!