Thursday, June 22, 2006

Rain drops

A spring is that I feel when you smile
A shade that cools all through the miles
When words, helpless remain a puppet
Like rain drops my tears, I better let it

40 comments:

Rose said...

U really bring out ur emotions thru words, dnt you?

U r really smitten by the luv bug, arnt u?

:)))

..Me

Saroj said...

Yes Jac, it can't be just your imagination, you have someone ;)

Dr O2 said...

perfectly put. This is where we come to the point that words are not so great after all!!

Dew Drops said...

jac, u found ur jill ??

jac said...

rose
hshhhhhhhhhh...
My wife... She evesdrop.
:)

jac said...

saroj
What if I am 70 years old.
:)

jac said...

dr o2

...and so much truth in it too

jac said...

dew drops

:-O
Then why the tears ?

I love Munich said...

That doesn't sound so happy after all ...
The sun will shine again Jac ... don't be sad!

Monica said...

Now THAT is what they call leave them wanting more.

LOL, do I understand you're married? I can NOT keep up with peoples' lives in blogland! LOL.

Have a great day, friend.

jac said...

i love munich

I believe so.

jac said...

monica
That is lovely insight you gave me, you know ?

You have poor memory too my friend.
Ahem !!

Saroj said...

Jac, no matters whether you are 70 yrs old or 30 yrs, whether you are married or unmarried. I think we all are friends!! That’s all

starry nights said...

Jac..just smitten. tears of joy?

hellbunny said...

She brings tears to your eyes Jac.Are those of sorrow or joy.

fritz said...

mmmm..the shortest poem..but c-u-t-e one that jac has ever written! ;;) umm..what kinda tears? ..rain rain go away..come again another day..we all want to play..hehehe

jac said...

saroj
ok so we are friends.
It was just a joke. Can't you share a joke with me ?
:)

jac said...

starry

just smitten, yes.
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa ?

jac said...

hellbunny

Well! you can make a guess

jac said...

shine

Rain just pours.
Every day too, even just now

Sarah said...

Crying in the rain!!

jac said...

immigrant in canada

How did you find me out !!??

Mindinside said...

You are born with blooms
and with you the blooms flourish

Rose said...

Kochu Kallaaa..

:OD

jac said...

And when you are here
I say here is the bloom.

:)

jac said...

rose
But she is deaf, dumb and blind too.
:-{}

I love Munich said...

You deleted my comment to your car!!!!!!!! :((

jac said...

i love munich

Sorry for that, karin !
It was a mispost happened during a power failure. It will be posted in due course.

November Rain said...

I watch you pour tears into a pen
I danced with it on paper as I took it in
With every rain a color of hope and joy
to fill the hearts of every girl and boy

to be a rainbow is what you have become to us
Hanging on your words we just must
Inspired to be the sun moon and stars
as we listen to Jac voice from a far

Manic Street Preacher said...

wow. tryin to read all ur posts...
beautiful words...
jus dropped by
peace..!!
\m/

jac said...

november rain

What we call as rainbow
Colours seven, you know
Shimmering colours of sheen
A mere, magic spray of rain

jac said...

manic street preacher

Welcome buddy. Be at home at my window.
Peace be with you.
Come back again.

m.reza said...

cry the rain Jac, for the sun you are, a rainbow in your eyes, all your heart may be green, i wish.

nishu said...

hi this is a nice blog man coool

nishu said...

hi this is a nice blog man coool

jac said...

m.reza
You flatter me.
Am flattered to the limits.

A rainbow ? Let me see what I have.

Thanks buddy.

jac said...

nishu
A pleasure to welcome a young friend.

I am pleased, stay awhile and visit again.

Sujay Sukumar said...

hmmm....that was heartfelt and pure. like a breath of fresh air. Nice poem dude.

I've been quite busy nowadays....

jac said...

Sujay
Thanks.

Your tag was taken.

Neers said...

this sure is short, sweet and beautiful!! :) thanks jac, for taking a stop at my abode! :)