Saturday, June 03, 2006

A mere touch.

There are some days that I feel so senile
There are sometimes that I care not
to smile
There are those times
I need just a touch


From some one who share,
From a hand that does care,


Knowing that dreams remain dreams all along
Knowing that hopes are just lies all along
Here is my song that is played
at the 'soh'

Here in this window... I open my soul.

*******

* P.S :- For those who don't know, the word 'soh' is related to music. It is the fifth note of a MAJOR SCALE

50 comments:

Vanathi said...

Good poem...

I love Munich said...

That's beautiful Jac .. very beautiful indeed! I know what you're saying - there are days on which I feel like 200 ... and others, on which I feel like 20 but I think that's normal! I am just happy the latter is outweighing the first .. ha-ha!
We all need a touch, the closeness of someone who cares .. we are humans! Your post does radiate some sadness - cheer up my friend!! There are MANY people who care ... you're not alone!!

Sujay Sukumar said...

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jac said...

Welcome to my window and thank you for the visit.
Am flattered by your comment, thanks.
Come back again.
:)

jac said...

i love munich
Well ! You make me speachless.
:)

jac said...

sujay sukumar

Noted

Sarah said...

Hmm wht should I say.. dreams remain dreams all along!! I learned tht.. a bit too late!
Sarah

Dotm said...

Jac, I remember those days practising those major and minor scales for hours when just learning to play the piano. Today I play the organ. My Father gave me that piano that my older sister and I learned to play on. Then when Walt bought me the organ I gave that family piano to my oldest daughter and her family to enjoy. After the 2 ops on my left little finger I found it hard to reach and play the keys with that hand. So I made up for it by playing chords with the left hand and the keys with the right hand. I love organ playing. I love guitar music also, but never did learn to play it. Did buy guitars for a couple of our sons when they were younger. Even had my step sons band playing in my cellar one winter and as soon as spring arrived that year Walt shipped the band from the cellar out to his Bike shop so he could hear the TV over them. :):)

majorleadhead said...

Jac... you asked me (silent one, hehe) to show you the poem. You wrote it on Tuesday, June 7th, 2005... almost a year ago! Wow. Time flies. The title was 'The Face of the Eyes'. I read it the other day and realized how much meaning there was to it, and how perfect it was. At the time I didn't really get it fully. So I decided to come back and thank you. It means a lot.

Walker said...

Very nice Jac a touch says so much.
Thanks for the lesson I didnt know about soh, we learn something everyday.
Enjoy your weekend buddy

starry nights said...

just beautiful..I know sometimes all it takes is a touch. no words are needed. I did not know what soh was thanks for the info.

fritz said...

so d-e-e-p but l-o-v-e-l-y poetry jac! ;;) soh..the fifth note of a major scale..cool..a new word for me to learn ;))

I love Munich said...

To Dot - can you indeed play a BIG church-organ?? I always wanted that ... it is so powerful! I had piano-lessons for four years in high-school but, sadly enough, forgot almost everything.
At least the "do-re-mi-fa-so" is still very much in my memory ...

jac said...

immigrant in canada

And what about hopes ?

jac said...

dotm
I didn't know that you play the Organ !!!

starry nights said...

Jac you have been Tagged. check my blog for info.

jac said...

majorleadhead

Well ! Thanks for that compliment as I really appreciate it.

A poem which I published before one year caught your attention now ? I am delighted to know that.

Welcome to my window and would like to add that if you like poems, that means you do write too. Please post it in a blog so that ebverybody can appreciate it.
Thanks again for coming and welcoming you anytime with feed back on my writing.

jac said...

walker
Thanks for the compliment.
Wishing you nice weekend too, buddy.

True, that we learn from each other. LOL
Thanks for the support.

jac said...

starrynight
Yes, a touch means a lot, to many.

I acknowledge the tag which is the second one.
But give me a little time.

jac said...

shine
Thanks for the compliment.

Yes, it is deep from within...from my soul.

jac said...

i love munich

But you can start to learn the piano again.

Sarah said...

hope = mirage
Sarah

Saroj said...

Jac,

Its just excellent. Its very true, sometimes it happens we just need
a touch of someone who care for us, no words just a touch

Rose said...

Hope ur soul gets touched soon..

:)

..Me

gem said...

She cares about you, I'm sure

jac said...

immigrant in canada

An optical illusion or a mirage is a lie, is it not ?

jac said...

saroj
Welcome to my window.
I am happy that you understand the importance of a touch...as you said, no words but just a touch.
:)

I would be pleased to see you again

jac said...

rose
But hopes are lies...or mirages as per Sarah.
:)

jac said...

gem
Do you really think so ?

Maya Cassis said...

do re mi fa so....aha now i get it.
great one there,mate:)

jac said...

maya

Thanks for the compliment.
Happy to know that you like it.

hellbunny said...

a touch can be so special.Its the connection between two people.

m.reza said...

i can see your soul, from miles away. that was great Jac, very nice.

jac said...

hellbunny
Yes, a touch can be so soothing...a connection between two people

jac said...

m.reza
You flatter me, buddy !

Rose said...

Nonsense!!

"Hope is this thing with feathers that perches on the soul" - Emily Dickinson

"Hope is the one thing tht drives us through al the impediments of life and keeps the fire within burning" - Me

;)

Sarah said...

You see what you want to see..is it not?

jac said...

rose

"In reality hope is the worst of all evils because it prolongs man's torments"
-Friedrich Nietzsche-

Thanks for that Emily quote.

I love her poems but I dislike just this one, for some reason.

If I can stop one heart from breaking
I shall not live in vain
If I can ease on Life the Aching
Or cool one pain

Or help one fainting Robin
Unto his Nest again
I shall not live in Vain.

jac said...

Sarah
Yes, I did.
But my eyebrows remain raised.


“Our death is not an end if we can live on in our children and the younger generation. For they are us, our bodies are just wilted leaves on the tree of life”

-Albert Einstein-

So don’t ever wait for it.

Lorna said...

Jac, heart touches heart....

jac said...

lorna

Some one has a caged one, as if it is trapped in a glass house or stuffed in a showcase.

Thanks for pointing out.
:)

Strictly for my friends said...

Completely identifiable!

sophie said...

mushy mushy
u hopelessly romantic

jac said...

stricly for friends

Strictly between us, you have a special welcome to my window, be my guest always and comment as you like.
Come back again if you like what you read.

jac said...

sophia
Yes, I am.

Inji Pennu said...

*touch* hope you get it.

Dotm said...

To answer "I love munich" and you "Jac", yes I can play the organ, but have never played the church ones. I did sing in the Choir in Church years back, but never play a Church organ.
My Aunt once owned the huge old organ with the pipes on top and I used to love the sound of that one.She used to let us kids play on it. Mine is a bit smaller, no pipes on top. It stands 38 inches High, 46 inches long and 25 inches deep with 2 keyboards (one above the other), each keyboard has 26 white keys and 18 black keys- about 3 1/2 octaves . Above the keys are a total of 48 push levers that have different instruments - 21 for upper keyboard, 6 for lower keyboard, and 8 are for using with the 13 foot peddals , rest for allover tones, 7 rhythems, 4 sliders to handle speed, volume and flute adjustments. It also has the keys that are called the "Magic Genie 88" which can play the chords for any scale note while I am playing the keys. I also have the foor pedal to higher or lower music at my will. This is a rough explanation of some of the items on my organ. I have a nice bench to sit on while playing.

Jac, reading this blog a second time I noticed the "soh" means 5th note in the MAJOR SCALE. So that must mean playing in the key of "G", as "G" is the 5th note in English in the MAJOR SCALE. So I learned another new word today.

trying to post again as internet explorer knocked me off my first try today. Hop it posts this time.
Have a nice day.

jac said...

lg
I know that *touch* is magical, but is hope too ?

Inji Pennu said...

Jac, do you know to read malaylam.Someone had written about 'touch', so beautifully in malayalam.. Will post the link if you can read malayalam.

jac said...

lg
I can read a little, but if it is in this new script (lipi), I will be damned !!!
(Excuse my language)
Anyway send it plz. I don't see any mail ID in your blog.
You are being extremely kind.
I have added you here without your consent.
:)