Thursday, April 13, 2006

Sublime

It is now ripples again
Reflecting on water remain

Its mine this time
My thoughts deep,
sublime
Coloured at times, mingling
Akin those waves
simmering

Tingling, caressing me
Teasing,
alluring me
Thoughts at déjà vu
Drops of tears too

My mind
stays cheering
My soul stay laughing

To help me keep
sailing
Stop this clock for me
Cage this time for me

31 comments:

gem said...

:)

jac said...

:))

boo said...

gorgeous :)))

jac said...

((((((hugs))))))lavishly.
Thanks.

sophie said...

hey awesome jac

jac said...

Sophia

Isn't it nice?
:)

hellbunny said...

A very feel good piece Jac

sophie said...

its lovely

jac said...

helbunny

Thanks for the compliment.

jac said...

sophia

:)

joy said...

Amen, and again.

Jay said...

I love a pink sunset.

Lee Ann said...

That is gorgeous!
Thank you for the lovely comment you left at my place!

Lorna said...

Yesterday, Lorna said " Cage this time for me" is very evocative. Don't let God cage this time for me---I'm way too tired.

jac said...

french

You are getting closer to Him again ? LOL

Thanks.

jac said...

miss jay

Who doesn't ?

But is there a sunset in another hue ?

jac said...

lee ann

Thanks, but the credit for that link goes to mindinside.

I am a great admirer of the expressions of eyes and you have beautiful eyes.

I too have a piece written about eyes. Plz check it out in my archive. To help you locate it, the link is below.

Thanks for coming to the window to my soul, come again if you enjoy what you see here.

http://jacpaulus.blogspot.com/2005_11_01_jacpaulus_archive.html

jac said...

lorna

When you cage the time, everything stops including the counter of your age.

However tired you are, won't you like to spend a lettle more extended time with David and your kith and kins ?

November Rain said...

Own yellow and orange silohette
a quiet sunset
lovers hold hands and sigh
as the sun shuts her eyes





I am in awe that photo is great beautiful

jac said...

novy

Hidden behind orange curtains
Sudden passion; strange sighs
Shaking hands; crazy whispers
Sun or moon; the light is gone


I too am delighted with this pic.

Thanks.

Weary Hag said...

This is a beautiful picture Jac.

Your poetry is lovely and inspiring ... you've put me in a quiet and calm place for the evening. Thanks!

jac said...

Weary hag

After a very long time, you found this blog again. I thought that I lost you for ever.

Thank you for your ardent support and compliments.

Please come again as I would be reading you again.

Wicked H said...

Such a beautiful picture. It calms me from within. Perfect for the prose. I am inspired.

Also, thank you for visiting my site. I will be back often.

Cheers

jac said...

wicked h


That compliment is great from somebody who visits me the first time.
Welcome to the window to my soul.

If you feel inspired and if you like what you read and see here, do come often.

I did like your blog and your cheers are reciprocated with more vigor.

Dotm said...

Peaceful time, sailing slowly on the water, waves from the light wind, I can just picture being there.

jac said...

dotm
Don't you feel what I felt over there ?

November Rain said...

"Hidden behind orange curtains
Sudden passion; strange sighs
Shaking hands; crazy whispers
Sun or moon; the light is gone"
---


Ocean is a goddess
Sun watches her undress
We but sail thier passion
captured by such bliss

jac said...

novy
Acknowledged
:))

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Sapna Anu B.George said...

if i could stop clock........... iwould, beatiful image and pome jac

Sapna Anu B.George said...

if i could stop clock........... iwould, beatiful image and poem jac